12.6.12
The cool breeze warms my face,
evanescing away with my inner calm,
the essence of my stability
leaving behind lit kindling in its place
sparks on the verge of extinction
hurling me into the fire
in their desperation
headfirst into the latest paradox
curlicues of ever-changing emotions
each one whisked away by the next
into the bright oblivion of discarded memories
spontaneously combusting into new meanings and desires
invisible sentiments melting into reality
incapable of holding their own
uncertain in their fluidity
evaporating at the mere mention of the last sunset--
and the sun's impending reunion with the horizon,
hopeful for the sunrise
hopeful for the sunrise
This is very good, With a Deep meaning. Keep writing more.
ReplyDeletelove sunset/sunrise imagery! i feel like it starts so peaceful and builds into darkening chaos in the second paragraph but it ends hopeful. very apt analogy
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