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9/28/11
***It's been such a long time since I've written anything on here :/ so I thought this would be a good time to catch up. My goal is to write a longer story but character and plot development is tough. I'm trying to find something that will spark the dormant muse within. In the meantime, what do you think of the piece below? What feeling do you think I'm trying to capture? My only hint to you is that this is written to capture how I feel since I've taken a break from yoga lately. Comments are always welcome:) ***
The kindling in my heart
ignites into fire on my tongue
Profanity slips out of my mouth effortlessly
Anger dancing around every word
Forgetting another glorious sunset
As my black eyes choose to focus
on the surviving darkness instead.
A possible edit:
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into fire on my tongue
Profanity slips from my mouth effortlessly
Anger dancing around every word
Forgetting another glorious sunset
As my black eyes focus instead
on the surviving darkness.