Sunday, July 10, 2011

Decaying Greenery

***I wrote this the other day in 4-6 minutes as I procrastinated applying to jobs yet again! What do you think?***

7/10/11

A lush coppice of lies
patiently waiting to be burned
to better harbor the fugitives of truth

1 comment:

  1. simple yet nicely said :)

    I would tweak the last line a LITTLE bit if i were you depending on how you want to say it.

    i wrote various variations out below but i deleted them bc it's your style of saying it :)

    but i do REALLLLLLYYYYY like it a lottt even with the last line as it is :)

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